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Friday, October 10, 2008
What I Would Change
The book i am reading is "Be More Chill". I would change what the squid(super computer you eat to make you popular) does in the story. I wanna change that because it would make the book more exciting and interseting to read. All the squips do in the book is talk to the person they got aten by to make them more social. I would at least make it to where after they did what you wanted they would take over your body for their own amusement. I think it would make the book better by adding some action and disaster to the story instead of the worst thing being that you dont have many friends in school. Thats just lame
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If the pill took over the body and made them that person then if every body took one person's pill then he would have some clones or some thing like it.
Thats a good idea. Who wants something telling you what to do from inside your head. Theres hardly a problum in the story
Marvin,
Your change is interesting, especially since I would guess that most teenagers think that not having any friends is a travesty! What type of action/disaster would you suggest adding to make the story believable?
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